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Su Hao is opening the voice with the apprentice.
„, Teacher, I started to write you to make me write that rebirth of an expert.”
„, Right, feels what kind of?”
„Feeling...... Hangs is a little big, what later can also write?”
„Living of control?”
„É...... A little difficult.”
Su Hao laughs: „neophyte stories you have not imagined to write!”
„Is......” Ai Xian a little embarrassed acknowledgment.
neophyte stories do not look at writing style to be simple, repertoire is not complex, but Su Hao previous life is almost is all writing neophyte stories, truly writes how many have?
A rhythm, has killed one group of people.
Then controls the protagonist strength, has killed one group of people.
„Moreover Teacher, although I the thing that uses you saying that but this such portrait doesn't have the issue?” Ai Xian cannot bear ask.
„What issue?” Su Hao said.
„You look, such protagonist, is unitary, slap in the face directly, feeling...... Too monotonous.”
„You want to say that doesn't have the sentiment, the role not three-dimensional? Said straightforwardly that the role doesn't have the connotation?”
„hehehe......” Ai Xian leaves the embarrassed sound.
although initially saw Su Hao to write the Seven Weapons' time, she has recognized the Su Hao Great Master writing skill.
But now writes web novel, the pattern of that repertoire makes her not adapt very much.
However she feels indeed right, the majority of neophyte stories connotation are not really many, even also some neophyte stories of manufacturing in a rough way, do not attend to the logic, but pursues crisply.
True neophyte stories, is not but simple!
Su Hao thinks that said: „What appearance protagonist in your article is, do you know?”
„Em, the conduct is overbearing, innermost feelings are arrogant, fight is experienced, is good to the person on one's own side, to the bystander powerful, opens to persuasion but not to coercion......” Ai Xian like this field of endeavor.
This is very standard Xuanhua neophyte stories protagonist.
„You thought that such character, doesn't have the connotation?” Su Hao asked.
„É...... Is a little.”
„You thought Battle Through the Heaven that I write calculates has the connotation?”
Ai Xian reply without hesitation: „Teacher writes naturally some!”
although Battle Through the Heaven is also neophyte stories, but light preliminary ‚not bullies the youth to be poor’ makes the entire article lose face.
„But you carefully analyzed to know, my protagonist, with your protagonist setting overlapped place.”
„É......”
„Ai Xian, the connotation is makes by story, does not make by the protagonist setting.” Su Hao chuckle, said: „This, I give the classical models of several characters to you.”
„?” Ai Xian a little ignorant compels.
However Su Hao actually clear settles the throat, coughs two, is having a meaning proudly, direct start to talk.
The sound is melodious, leading a nobody to be possible and haughtiness.
„Hand picks the stars with the livelihood, in society altruism so person!”
Su Hao's sang to have the system addition, although sings and reads aloud differently, but after all somewhat common ground.
The short lines, by the profoundness that he read aloud.
Ai Xian hear word, as if saw an unsurpassed powerhouse, eyes full is proud intent, in Shi is independent.
Being proud...... Arrogant...... Even is passing several points of dismal faintly.
„, Ai Xian, you said how you write some character time, is he in some specific environment saying lines proudly, the image so unplentiful?” Su Hao smiles, this awakened Ai Xian.
„Again for example......”
The Su Hao look changes , to continue to say.
„a thousand tribulations, a hundred disasters, permanent in a hurry, in a flash!”
„undying body, Inextinguishable soul, shaking the old and illuminating the new, unmanned enemy!”
„When counter is chaotic to the Yin-Yang, I used the demon blood to dye the blue sky! Trillion lives are the soldiers, million Gods and Demons will be, Bai Jiangtai leaves, many Gods awe into submission submissive. The subduing the demons stone dyes Saint Blood, seals world Wan demon greatly, dares the day to resist!”
The voice falls, Ai Xian as if feels a dreadful demon prestige, the direct impact horizon.
Even if not add any description, Ai Xian can also feel that ‚person’ image!
„Again for example......”
Su Hao expression one positive, said.
„Moral bodhi non- fruits of virtue, know me now are I!”
Words although is extremely short, but Ai Xian actually as if saw that from the moral karma escapes, but form.
On his face, very real, very real, meaning of the liking.
Image?
Are the images of these people not very complete?
Connotation?
Even if not perform other plots, Ai Xian can also imagine obtains their images, even make up a series of details on the brain, with their passing experiences.
This may compared with direct-viewing many that any writing comes!
„Now understood? The protagonist image, has not related with theme anything, but will write the issue that will not write.” Su Hao says with a smile.
„Yes, Teacher!” Ai Xian is at heart excited, should say.
Su Hao shows a faint smile, he said not wrong.
Perhaps neophyte stories cannot like other articles, making people feel the inspiration of any energy, but in the characterization, actually does not fall in leeward.
Especially previous life that several big shot......
„Right master.”
„What matter?”
„dōng dōng dōng sound that in your room has broadcast, is what?” Ai Xian cannot bear ask finally.
Su Hao turned head, looked at one by the dōng dōng dōng straight loud front door that becoming angry out of shame Su Xiaoyi patted.
Expression tranquil returning said: „All right, the My family cat is playing the gate.”
Cat that „in teacher your family raises? Moreover can the trivial cat cause such big sound?”
These words Ai Xian has not said that but said finally: „The teacher, I continued the symbol first.”
„Goes.”
The voice just hung up, Su Xiaoyi shamed the sound of anger to shout.
„Onii... -sama! You come out to me!”
This goods have knocked for two hours, in this period was beats to the door......
Luckily Su Hao prepared meals and water ahead of time, otherwise exits now, will be shamed the angry Su Xiaoyi to bite to death absolutely.
Su Hao looked at entrance one, shrugs, a face indifferent taking earphone, plays the music.
„In any case is not my mistake, who makes you that self-confident makes me study ‚Filthy Speech Using Hate’, but also makes me write any impressions of after-reading...... After I read the feeling am, making me write the impressions of after-reading big shot is real ‚big shot’.”
Let the Su Hao study ‚Filthy Speech Using Hate’...... This saying also owes the exit / to speak that she said.
In any case makes a mistake is not Su Hao, Su Hao then leisurely and carefree listened to two hours of music, in this period had eaten one pile of melon seed peanuts, but also watched a movie.
After Su Xiaoyi no longer knocks on a door, Su Hao opens the front door.
„Why you did not tell me, were you Filthy Speech Using Hate?” The appearance that Su Xiaoyi clenches jaws, appears in front of Su Hao's immediately.
„Blames me.” Su Hao shrugs: „My net ID is anything, you will not look.”
„You”
„Do your what you, want me to write impressions of after-reading to you again?”
Zizi of Su Xiaoyi two rows of small tooth air/Qi has rubbed, making Su Hao a little afraid.
This girl will not nip directly......
„Draft?”
„Ha?” Su Hao stares.
„I said the draft, Longevity Sword.” Su Xiaoyi clenches teeth saying: „After having magazine these?”
„É...... Has.”
„Gives me to come!”
„Does?” Asking of Su Hao surprise.
Su Xiaoyi small face blushed, UU reads
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Spoke several slurred words in a low voice.
„What? Haven't I heard?” Su Hao [say / way].
„I said that I want to look!”
The Su Xiaoyi's look, seemed saying.
You asked again, I bit to death you!
„also......”
„What?”
„A bit faster writes......”
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