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„Kisses one, kisses one......”
Creating a disturbance never dislikes the matter to be big, in any case is not their matters.
However is actually Su Hao and Su Xiaoyi's matter!
„Then what to do? What to do? Damn Su Hao, immediately has also flustered with fully......” Su Xiaoyi to own younger sister, she possible own Su Hao?
But the shout of surroundings person......
Unavoidably, she cannot help but complained.
Em, is really Su Hao's is wrong.
although makes Su Hao leave fully...... Is one.
Su Hao also sighed, oneself were a little slightly was a moment ago childish.
Creates a disturbance, is why earnest.
However doesn't matter, kisses anything, the book is the joke between young young girls, Su Hao spoke two words of praise, for example wants a moment ago to that Ouyang's long legs......
cough cough, to ‚this that Ouyang Yan said is a joke, left seriously’ words, everybody also knows in any case this type ‚kissed one’ the commitment was only the joke of creating a disturbance nature, openly expressed did not have any issue.
Naturally, everybody are disappointed, but how that closes the Su Hao anything matter.
Therefore Su Hao thinks start to talk: „Xiaoyi, I”
Su Xiaoyi's on the face suddenly blushed, then turns head to run.
Under slender longleg several runs up to the Dojo entrance, at the maximum speed changes the shoes, immediately did not have the shade.
Su Xiaoyi, escaped......
„Yeah, the little elder brother has been a pity, that girl although age dot, but the person may very attractive!”
„After all young, also shyness.”
„Brothers, be not gawking, pursues, perhaps you can also meet good meeting with!”
The crowds talked at once a big pile.
Su Hao stiff there, mouth results in goldfish, gathers.
„My words have not said......”
......
When Su Hao goes home, Su Xiaoyi went home, closes oneself in the room, does not come out.
Cousin Su Qianxin as if exited to do grocery shopping, she diligently went forward toward the image of housewife.
Su Qianxin does grocery shopping every day, moreover buys is a big pile, then basically the food exactly less than 24 hours will consume.
although Su Hao has not eaten to the meal that she makes......
Waste!
The Su Hao's heart is a little sore.
He thought suddenly promises the cousin to prepare food is a wrong decision.
Only is the buying money for vegetables of waste, can make Su Hao love dearly for a long time, this affected the review absolutely.
„Ok, first writes writing style director who Feng Shu said.” Su Hao deeply inspired, sits in front of the computer.
neophyte stories writing style said that's all actually on the highlight \; first, to be small \; second, white.
Small is crisp, white is quick, naturally, about is, crisp.
‚Crisp’ character, on the survey the entirety of neophyte stories, like one ‚handsome’ character, the Su Hao's life was the same on the survey.
Em, Su Hao thinks so.
Naturally, such simple writing is not definitely good, this type has not distinguished with program anything, you must pour water toward, making the program plentiful, can turn into the article.
Thereupon Su Hao writes with vigor, regarding ‚crisp’ character is the center, has written more than 2000 characters natural.
although can also many of water, who lets this time not have the payment for published piece.
Does not make money, water do that many do?
After finishing, Su Hao gave Feng Shu to send.
Editors already waited awaited eagerly, if not ‚subscription’( to payment for published piece), they want to take the blade to go to Su Hao's Family to urge to go!
The authors can neophyte stories Writing Skill, because the present authors are the literary article family background , to continue to write the literary article, can support itself.
Editor is not but good!
As Editor,
You will not finish the main point, verifies? How does the mental perception know brave? „Sent in the Little White writing technique greatly!” After Feng Shu receives the document, immediately shouted loudly one.
, Editors all encircled.
„Where where?”
„Writes, why my author feeling under same writes, completely throws the street?”
„What successful method does here have?”
They gather round the Feng Shu's computer, in the eyes full is curious and excited.
Editor Zi Ye that even if not cope with Su Hao has also collected.
Does not have the means that this is the rice bowl that they eat meal.
Finally Editor Lan Zao coughs: „Feng Shu, puts the first curriculum of author special area, then passes to us with the mail.”
„Good, Editor.” Feng Shu has operated quickly, he gave back to Su Hao's teaching to add a title.
«Great God Filthy Speech Directs Personally, by neophyte stories Writing Skill»
Then gave each Editor to send one, oneself looked.
The Su Hao introduction said:
„So-called neophyte stories, is actually the abbreviation of crisp article, how is centered on to make the reader crisp, is the skill of commercial article. But does not comply with the mainstream literary writing style......”
„The essence of crisp article lies in anticipation, slap in the face with ambiguous.”
„Anticipation feels, in Battle Through the Heaven that for example I write, first after the pressure raises, after protagonist broke an engagement, in the readers heart will constrain an anger, hopes to see protagonist all retaliates this air/Qi, after third year approximately, everybody knows that protagonist can defeat the fiancee, is one very good anticipation......”
„ Please must pay great attention, that constrains cannot extremely, for example I once noticed that tries to study my book, called Slaying Vault of Heaven, that author wrote protagonist also to be pressed,
the www.uukanshu.com family has not exterminated an entire family, fiancee quilt, protagonist was chased down...... ”
„He is a silly fork, what the reader leads into is your protagonist, you make the reader experience one time this experience, others do not want to kill you to be strange!”
„Therefore constrains cannot be too much, making the reader anticipate that following slapping the face, but the letting reader who cannot press abandons the book......”
„then we receive slap in the face......”
Su Hao's writing style is very white, this neophyte stories Writing Skill is also so, but is truly easy to understand.
„So that's how it is!”
„This is neophyte stories, no wonder my author under writes the neophyte stories failure.”
„He said indeed is reasonable, the words said that he had pointed out, I discovered that seems like in the beforehand fire literary article, which majority of will not have depressing plot.”
„Indeed, our crowd of Editor, unexpectedly have lost to an author...... No wonder he can maintain top selling ranking first!”
Editor reads are many, they naturally can understand Su Hao's to explain that has profound understanding.
But the issue is......
The line of sight of everybody is very strange, Su Hao was a little haughty by own novel example, unexpectedly also takes Slaying Vault of Heaven to act as the counter-example......
This was naked slapping the face!
The Feng Shu corners of the mouth pull out: „My doesn't big, your day do the matter to be at heart uncomfortable?”
They think is very right, in a remote rented room, the «Slaying Vault of Heaven» author, Wind and Cloud Under the Heaven fell the mouse directly.
„bastard! I remembered you!”
......
But in fact, in Su Hao not far away, little girl of also vitality is falling the pillow.
„Damn Su Hao! He wants to make me kiss him absolutely!”
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